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IN CONTROL
EPISODE 1
Written by
Abdullah malik
Music fast drums
Black screen with credit going top to bottom
Narrator (v.o)
previously what happed Sam got out of prison while
Danny got out of prison and began to work in the supermarket.
Music fades away
Int high street-day
Sam is walking down to look for a fight and to get money Charlie boy is walking and bumps in to Sam and know things so crazy and wild
Sam # tight on
what the f*** you think your doing do, you what a slap
Music: slow to fast drums
Sam punches him and jacks his phone and then begins to run away Charlie boy chases him
Camera angle:cu dolly
Charlie boy #
Come back!!!
Charlie boy is still running after him and runs up a building runs through walls and runs in buildings
Charlie boy
what the f*** is wrong with you
come back here
Ext: supermarket
Sam runs into a shop smashing the stuff in the supermarket Danny the supermarket man is shocked and looks at him
Danny
what the hell
Charlie boy is lost and he can’t find Sam and he goes into a shop to by a drink Charlie boy looks to the side and could see Sam but he acts like he did not see him
Sam
quietly: o shit he now I’m here
Sam begins to walk slowly and then he runs Danny was in his way and pumps in to him
Camera angle:msu
Danny
hello my brother long time no see
how you feeling you smashing up my stuff
Charlie boy
O that’s the guy that jacked my phone give it
back
Sam
no I did not he chats ball shit
Danny
wait shill out let me think about it
Sam walks slowly to the door
Charlie boy
I don’t believe you Sam
Sam pulls out his pistol gin and locks the door and kept everyone as hostage
Sam
everyone git down
They all got down except for one
Deans mum
I aren’t getting down I don’t even know you
Sam
you look family from your eyes you look
like dean that was in prison am I write
deans mum
how the f*** do you know that
Sam
I made him commit soused
deans mum
what the f*** I am going to kill you
Dean’s mum begins to go crazy and smashes every think and slaps sam on the face and punches him on the balls Sam punches her and gets the gun and hits here on the head
Charlie boy
what do you want
Sam
give me the money from the till now
Sam points at the catch machine and loads his gun
Danny
No I worked for that money cant you earn it you’re self
Sam gets his gun and Danny stands up Sam looks at his gun and shoots Danny on the leg
Danny
ok ok don’t kill me please we used to be
friend please don’t I would give you much more if
you let everyone go please
Sam
no money now
Sam begins to work at the cash machine and shoots the lock and then the catch opens and Sam takes all of the money Charlie boy moves slowly to Sam and deans mum begins to wake up
Sam
you woke up quickly dean’s mum
Sam sits down and begins to think of some thinks Charlie boy and deans mum give eye contact and Charlie boy moves his head at Sam and deans mum nods his head Charlie boy grabs Sam’s leg and holds it
Charlie boy
go on then dean
Sam gets his gun and shots Charlie boy on his arm and dean’s mum laughs at him
Deans mum
kill him for me
Sam
Na man you dizzy o I think you forgot I was the one that killed your son if it was me I would of helped Charlie boy so unlucky
Sam does not know what to do he is walking up and down and gets deans mum and ties it on a chair
Deans mum
get of me get of me why you doing this
Dean’s mum spits on Sam and then Sam keeps spitting on deans mum
Sam
anyone ones a peace of me just stand now
No one stand up everyone is quit
Sam
good
Charlie boy
help
Sam
now one could here you so shut up I don’t
want to hear your duty voice
Charlie boy
f*** of
Danny
wait
Sam
how is your leg is it fine I guess wait is there a another way out of this supermarket Danny
Danny
na man
Danny finds a phone and calls the police and tells them to come and then they begin to come
music slow and then begins to go fast drums
cross over 1
police car begins to come a swat team is coming
cross over 2
Sam:
what the hell have you got there Danny
Sam picks up the phone and looks at Danny
Sam:
Did I just see that give it here
Danny:
no
Sam redials the previous number and looks at Danny
Sam:
what the hell is wrong with you
Sam gets Danny and shoots him on his arm
music: big bass fast music
Cross over 3
the police are coming to the super market
Police officer:
this is the police you are surrounded could you please
get out of the building Sam we could fix this all
you have to do is stop and come out
music stops
Sam:
how the hell they know my name
Sam smashes the window and puts a gun on Danny and looks at the police
music begins out of control theme tune comes on and that the end